This was actually my superpower. When I would review my friend’s papers during grad school, as soon as my eyes glazed over or my attention wandered, I would circle the paragraph and tell them to clean it up.

Brain going everywhere is usually a pretty clear sign of convoluted writing, and if you can tell someone to fix it, do.

No joke, it looks like that may be the price for both units you can see there. Hard to tell from the sign, but it has two product codes with a + between.

Seems a bit steep for a single grand piano, and just about right for two.

I’m guessing there was more context before the top comment in this screenshot?