I read on mobile. I didn’t say it wasn’t fine, it’s definitely fine, I said it could be different. And in my opinion, that difference would make it slightly better. It just reads kinda stilted and disjointed to me, like separate unrelated thoughts, when it’s actually just one point being made.
You’re allowed to put more than one sentence in a paragraph, encouraged even, especially when those sentences are all very directly related.
I write on mobile, its formatted fine for mobile.
I read on mobile. I didn’t say it wasn’t fine, it’s definitely fine, I said it could be different. And in my opinion, that difference would make it slightly better. It just reads kinda stilted and disjointed to me, like separate unrelated thoughts, when it’s actually just one point being made.